Tags : | RnB | 2.47 MB | Has Lyrics
Description : It's been a while since i have been here on looperman, i have been a busy bee with work/making music with some other musicians. This is a song i wrote and just couldn't find the right track but low and behold i came across this beautiful FREE to use instrumental, so all credits and a huge shout out to the PROD. "SYNDROME" for such an AMAZING track and making it completely FREE to use for non profit, so i have permission to use. Thank You! Vocals Sung By Me, Thanks if you choose to listen :)

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  1. Prymus0800
    Prymus0800 on Sat 16th Jun 2018 - 4 days ago
    Nice, i would also put some reverb on your voice :)
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Thanks for taking a listen, yep, a little more improvements to be made here and there, it's a rough draft so i'm glad you think it is Nice. :)
  2. davepowell1
    davepowell1 on Fri 15th Jun 2018 - 5 days ago
    Very nice....
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Hello davepowell1,

    Thank you for taking a listen/kind words you left here. I'm so glad you liked my song, it is very much appreciated! :)
  3. adamms
    adamms on Thu 14th Jun 2018 - 6 days ago
    very cool track, like alot
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Thank you for listening and commenting, It's appreciated :)
  4. Arloph09
    Arloph09 on Thu 14th Jun 2018 - 6 days ago
    i cant stop listening ..damn it
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Hi Arloph09,

    Thank you! so much for stopping by, i appreciate it very much indeed...Your comment tells me i did something right when i sung this, haha...Thanks again! :)
  5. Alien
    Alien on Thu 14th Jun 2018 - 1 week ago
    Wonderful voice and singing!
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Hello Alien,

    Thank you for stopping by and for the nice feedback here about my voice/singing, it's good to know you enjoyed/like my singing. It's much appreciated :)
  6. wikkid
    wikkid on Wed 13th Jun 2018 - 1 week ago
    One more thing.

    Your voice kinda reminds me of the late, great Eva Cassidy

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?reload=9&v=bTNLYeaL7No

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2rd8VktT8xY

    As you progress with your songs, you may want to try overdubbing your vocals in two or three part harmony on the song chorus.

    I'm sure it will sound fantastic.
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Two of my fave songs by Eva. Thanks! Again for the suggestions, every little piece of information/Advice with regards to music/singing which i love, only helps me to improve much more.
  7. wikkid
    wikkid on Wed 13th Jun 2018 - 1 week ago
    Wow! Wonderful job on the vocals.
    Your pitch is spot on, and your overall tone is quite lovely. This could be either be classified under smooth jazz, lo-fi or R&B. Kudos also for continuing to work on and write your own songs, especially if you don't want someone else to define you and be made into their image. Be true to yourself.

    I'm marking this as a fave, and all my best to you.
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Hi wikkid,

    Thank you so very much for stopping by and for the wonderful! feedback/valid information, about my harmonies, for some reason i always feel they don't sound the way i want them to, so i will certainly give your suggestion a try.

    The two Eva Cassidy songs you gave links to are actually 2 of my fave songs of hers, she had such a natural beautiful pitch perfect voice that would melt any cold heart.

    I agree this song sounds much more R&B, though they categorized it as hip hop, i shall change genres i think. Thank you once again for your time, valid info and overall wonderful! feedback, it is highly appreciated indeed :)
  8. Nous2
    Nous2 on Wed 13th Jun 2018 - 1 week ago
    good rnb song
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Thank you for stopping by and taking a listen/comment, Much Appreciated! :)
  9. smallpaul
    smallpaul on Wed 13th Jun 2018 - 1 week ago
    Beautiful start to the day!!!! Thank you.
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Hi smallpaul, i appreciate the kind words and i'm so happy you enjoyed your listen. Have a most wonderful! day indeed :)
  10. eggs0ntoast
    eggs0ntoast on Wed 13th Jun 2018 - 1 week ago
    sweet sounds, nice work :)
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Hi eggs0ntoast, thank you kindly for the lovely feedback here, i'm glad you like the work i have done with this beautiful track, i very much appreciate you stopping by to listen. Thanks! :)
  11. ArtOfficialSounds
    ArtOfficialSounds on Tue 12th Jun 2018 - 1 week ago
    Very soothing voice. A little hard to hear some things you are saying. I know how much mixing sucks lol. The idea is very good though.
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Hi AOS, thank you for stopping by and taking a listen, i truly appreciate it very much. I agree mixing sucks and it certainly is not my forte, but i still try haha...Thanks again!
  12. BLEEP
    BLEEP on Tue 12th Jun 2018 - 1 week ago
    Hello Melodiy sweetie,

    what a brilliant track here! the melt between the instrumentation and your delicious voice creates a very felted, very intimist atmosphere.
    Congratulations to syndrome of course for the instrumental part (the bass line is warmy as i like); your voice is perfectly ready, it's purely and simply of the velvet!

    This kind of track would deserve to pass in studio undoubtedly! Magnificently realized, congratulation still for this performance

    Bleep
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Hi BLEEP,

    Thank you enormously indeed for such beautiful words about my song/voice, it's highly appreciated indeed. I am so very pleased you came to listen in here. I have written down the lyrics for this song i wrote, just simply but meaningful lyrics, as i know sometimes certain words may not be clear enough to here with regards to mix or clarity of vocals sometimes, so your request is granted haha... Thanks again.
  13. Sunbeats
    Sunbeats on Mon 11th Jun 2018 - 1 week ago
    Soothing.
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Thank you so much! i appreciate you taking a listen into this :)
  14. LeiShoo
    LeiShoo on Sun 10th Jun 2018 - 1 week ago
    Beautiful, nice job! :)
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Hello LeiShoo, thank you for stopping by and taking a listen to my song and for the nice comment. I am glad that you liked what you heard...It is very much appreciated! indeed :)
  15. LRAD
    LRAD on Sun 10th Jun 2018 - 1 week ago
    Veeery smooth, the mic used isnt the greatest but I have an idea to make it work with the rest of the track, can you contact me? Thanks!
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Thank you for taking a listen, yeah this mic is bog standard but this recording is also a rough draft so the sound is not as on point as it could be but that can be corrected. Thanks for the offer of contacting you, very kind of you to suggest that but i think i will re-do this at some point and when i do it will be far much better but thanks again :)
  16. neuromancer56
    neuromancer56 on Sun 10th Jun 2018 - 1 week ago
    Sounds lovely. Always makes me smile. The vocal recording is so much better here. Did you get a new mic or are you recording differently than before?
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Hey, thanks for the nice feedback. I have the same mic i bought recently, it's just a bog standard mic but i'm just recording differently than before, it's better but not quite how i want it to be, I'm such a perfectionist at times haha...appreciate the feedback :)
  17. Zeus2125
    Zeus2125 on Sat 9th Jun 2018 - 1 week ago
    The vibe this gives me is awesome! It's so chill yet so emotional it's beautiful! I'm definitely high on love now! lol. Maybe lowering the vocals a little bit might help but everything was awesome!
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Hello Zeus2125, thank you for stopping by, your lovely feedback certainly made me smile because i sung this as a rough draft, so it's nice to see you appreciated what you heard and thanks again for the suggestion here, every little bit of info/suggestions is of great help, Thank You! :)
  18. helruna
    helruna on Sat 9th Jun 2018 - 1 week ago
    Very sweet, loving and emotionally charged tune. Is the singer an English speaking native or did you use noise gate? I work mainly with non-native English speakers, there's a little cut off. Certainly not a criticism as you're production is like 1000000 better than mine. Wanna make this song a killer one and you both the killer song you deserve. Keep it real. Wanna hear more!
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Hi helruna, I'm the vocalist singing here on this track, and yes i'm an English speaking native, i have no idea what noise gate is haha... i'm just a vocalist and sing the song how i feel it, i know nothing about the technical side, my mixing is not forte lets just say though i do try to mix of a sort. Thank you for taking a listen in and liking my song, it's much appreciated indeed :)
  19. RuslanG
    RuslanG on Sat 9th Jun 2018 - 1 week ago
    Nice!
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Hi RuslanG, thank you for stopping by, i'm glad you thought my recording was nice, it means a lot coming such an amazing producer of fine music as yourself. I still have some work to do on this but i sure appreciate you taking the time to listen/liking my song :)
  20. DRJBEATS
    DRJBEATS on Sat 9th Jun 2018 - 1 week ago
    this is super smooth, love it
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Hello DRJBEATS, thanks for taking a listen in and leaving such kind words, i'm glad you liked what you heard because it is only a rough draft, i have a lot more work to do on this with regards to mixing but your feedback is much Appreciated! indeed :)
  21. PatriciaEdwards
    PatriciaEdwards on Fri 8th Jun 2018 - 1 week ago
    Gal! What a smooth track this is! Dem vocals sound just like the good ole days, when people could really sing and lyrics were about something. The music is so sexy and you did a great job embracing that. Love the subtle background. Kudos to you both!

    Note: Idunno a thing about technical stuff. :-)
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Hi PatriciaEdwards, thank you for stopping by. I truly appreciate the wonderful feedback here and i'm so glad you enjoyed your listen to my song. I totally agree with girl, this track is super sexy, i was so happy/lucky to have found it. I too know nothing about technical stuff, my voice is my instrument, i leave all that other technical stuff to the experts but i still try to do some kinda mix haha...Thanks again! :)
  22. flonut7
    flonut7 on Thu 7th Jun 2018 - 1 week ago
    very nice melody and vocals are so perfectly mellow. maybe one thing you might consider is giving your VOX jut a touch more room to sit in the upper frequencies. Smokey and dark is great for this style of song, but a tad more crispy could really add to the overall clarity of your voice. maybe bump up the eq around 4750KHZ by a decibel or less, and see how it feels/ just a thought, well done though well done
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Hello flount7, Thank you o very much for stopping by to take a listen in, i so appreciate the suggestions as i am always looking for valuable information with regards to mixing and any other helpful tips to learn what i may be doing wrong or simply how to improve my recordings, i certainly like all you have suggested, thanks you!

    I'm glad to know you enjoyed the track and my vocals, it makes it all worth it, Much appreciated! :)
  23. EricMilligan
    EricMilligan on Thu 7th Jun 2018 - 2 weeks ago
    A really fine track, Melodiy. Your vocals are excellent. Very interesting melody. Not predictable or repetitive. Very contemporary sound. You picked a really good backing track to work with. And, the recording levels on your vocals seem much better on this track than others where there was some clipping. Yes, the mix could still use a bit of refinement I think on balance, but it is, without a doubt, very very nice work!
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Hello Eric, Thank you so much for the wonderful comments my friend. I'm glad you like the track and my vocals, i agree the recording levels are better than some of my other recordings and it does need some refinement on the balance, i so agree with you, coming from a fine music maker such as yourself, it sure means a lot to me...Thanks a million for such helpful and valid feedback, i appreciate it very much indeed. :)
  24. vigwig
    vigwig on Thu 7th Jun 2018 - 2 weeks ago
    I too was captivated by your voice. I think it has the feel of a torch song and picture you in a slinky sequined sheath crooning to an attentive audience of young lovers.... oh, it quit kind of abruptly. Wah - - - - - - - I want more. vig
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Hi Vigwig, Thank you kindly Sir, for the lovely feedback here, it made me *smile*...I'm so glad you enjoyed listening to my voice, i appreciate that very much indeed. You are absolutely right, it does stop suddenly, the only thing i was not happy about on the track but i guess it can be fixed somehow maybe with some kind of fading out at the end, it's still in the raw stages but again i appreciate your great! comment :)
  25. victorhaaning
    victorhaaning on Wed 6th Jun 2018 - 2 weeks ago
    Really beautiful track. The voice compliments the kinda lo-fi r&b track perfectly. Sure the recording is a bit iffy, vocals are a bit too dry and feel a bit left out of the mix. Would suggest putting some reverb on, as well as equalizing the high-end tones. Other than that, you got a great song on your hands
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Thank you so very much Victorhaaning, it's always nice to get feedback because this is how i learn and grow of course haha...it's a rough draft not the finished product, needs more work on it. I always do a rough quick draft after writing my lyrics, so i agree and thank you for the feedback :)
  26. madmadi007
    madmadi007 on Wed 6th Jun 2018 - 2 weeks ago
    when i heard your voice i just fell in love straight away, you got me! Have you got a YouTube channel?
    MelodiySongbird
    Reply by MelodiySongbird Hi madmadi007, thank you for the kind words, no i don't have a You Tube channel sorry, i'm just working with some musicians and writing some new songs and to be honest i mostly sing for pleasure but again thank you so much! i appreciate the feedback, good to know you like my voice :)

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LYRICS:
Doo Dum Dooo

Rise and Shine
Open up those sleepy eyes hey,
Draw back the curtains
Let the sun shine in.

It's time to breathe
Letting go of worries
The day has just begun
Mother Nature's got me high on love
So high on love....

I don't mind if it rains today
Or the sky is gray, you won't
Hear no complaints from me
I don't mind if the snow will fall
I'll embrace it all, it's a cleansing
This world needs. Repeat twice

Take your time, take a journey
Take a ride, and, Mother Nature's amplified,
Seeing the beauty through these eyes, and
It's time to breathe letting go of worries
The day has just begun Mother Nature's got me high
on love, so high on love, so high on love,

Rise and shine, take your time,
open up those sleepy eyes...
Draw back the curtains and let the sun
Shine in...Time to breathe letting go of
All your worries, Mother Natures got me,
Mother Nature's got me high on love...

 


 

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