Description : Update: Thanks to the great great help of Orlando51 the track now is in its final state. He made the piano and violins sound really good together withthe guitar. Big question is if this needs vocals or if it is good as it is right now. Please comment your thoughts about it. Thank you Orlando51 for helping me out. You have my sincere gratitude!

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  1. NitramBeatS
    NitramBeatS on Thu 6th Aug 2015 - 5 years ago

    I feel really sorry for u bro, nobody deserves to go through things like that.
    Great work by the way, keep ya head up ;)

  2. Christk
    Christk on Sun 2nd Aug 2015 - 5 years ago

    Good evening, listening to the song and reading the description, I would say that would not I put words to it. Already in itself is an acoustic, beautiful piece that I think is most likely to need a good balance of instruments in processing.
    Very beautiful composition.Allow me to get on my file! Thank you!

  3. theHumps
    theHumps on Wed 17th Jun 2015 - 5 years ago

    Strings and the acoustic guitar are very nice together. It's a well written piece of music. Hat's off to Orlando for helping!

    Although the instrumental is strong I feel it could benefit from adding some vox. The way it is written, it's structure and space you left allows for some vox to be added. Songs from the heart are always the best. The right words, random phrases and lyrics are sometimes hard to find but your head and heart seems to be in this one, give it a go!


  4. WoozyBeats
    WoozyBeats on Wed 17th Jun 2015 - 5 years ago

    Sounding Good Mudhoen, quite different than your other ones.
    I love it, it's calm, smooth and easy to listen to.
    You did well at translating your emotions into this fine piece of music.
    Reminds me a bit of Japanese music (which i love by the way).
    Well done and Stay Strong ;)

    Reply by mudhoen

    Thank you very much woozybeats. Very glad you like the song. Orlando51 really has put the missing pieces together.

  5. TGroove
    TGroove on Tue 16th Jun 2015 - 5 years ago

    I honestly think this track already evokes many emotions as is and that vocals are not needed. However, the right vocals could be a beautiful touch, I just do no think they are absolutely necessary. It's just unfortunate the track is a product of such sad news but you did a great job of communicating your emotions through music. Stay strong

    Reply by mudhoen

    Thank you for your well founded opinion . The track really fits with my emotion and vocals might not be needed. Thought if someone could make some vocals to it I could put them together and take the best one. Also thank you for your kind words!

  6. Mosaic
    Mosaic on Sat 6th Jun 2015 - 5 years ago

    Hey mate

    First off know exactly what you are going through, sadly I did loose my father to cancer back in 2013, only actually knew he wasn't well approx. 6 weeks, so I send all my hope that your father pulls through for you, fingers crossed dude...Always hard trying to do tracks about this type of thing, I have done 2 trance tracks for my father which are on my profile, liking the guitar as is in this one, little variety would help but thinking that can happen after finding vocals for the mix, personally would add strings/pad to under lay the piece, to portray more feelings into the track, to get across the feelings of sadness if you want to go down that way??? or a pad to be uplifting with hope? Not sure what way you want to go with the piece, with adding the strings or pads, you could then have a break from the guitar and let the strings tell the story you want from piece...2 listens now...Thinking what have mentioned might help get more feelings into the piece...Peace n best of luck for you friend...Mosaic...

    Reply by mudhoen

    Thank you for your kind words. I am happy to hear that even a horrible decease can inspire us to make music. I guess it is a way to express the feeling that we have. I will try to experiment with a pad. I think you are right. It needs a bit more body and variation.

  7. DesignedImpression
    DesignedImpression on Thu 4th Jun 2015 - 5 years ago

    This is perfect for the theme of your description! Hm, my apologies, I mean sorry to hear the news, just know it'll be alright, he's in good hands for real. I dig what you're trying to do with this and I really can understand the connection of the situation. Music is a way of letting em know what matters. May I try something as well? I see others have tried and something strange happens haha, Battle! haha, I use FL as well but haven't even messed with this Nexus instrument so it should be fun. Thanks for sharing, Make some great memories til the end bro!

    Reply by mudhoen

    Thank you for your comment. Music is a global message everybody can understand. If you want you can try to make something out of it. Would be very nice!

  8. silverman
    silverman on Tue 2nd Jun 2015 - 5 years ago

    I think the guitar sounds to hard for a slow piece.
    I've speeded it up and I reckon it sounds better rocking a bit more but I don't think that's what's wanted.

    Reply by mudhoen

    I think that the faster pace will be fine. Just see what you can make out of it. I am already ver grateful!

  9. silverman
    silverman on Mon 1st Jun 2015 - 5 years ago

    How old is your dad? I'm messing about with your track but I cannot for the life of me soften hat hard guitar so it's coming out a bit of a cross between Johnny Rotten and Jean Michel Jarre at the moment.

    Reply by mudhoen

    My dad is 64..I am 35 years old. I know it is not an easy song to play and vocals will be hard. thtat is why I put it on here. A lot of talented people in here may find a way to make something out of it. I have no problem with (small) changes of the song if necessary. I really appreciate that you have taken so much time and effort to help me. Respect!

  10. DaanVanBaak
    DaanVanBaak on Sun 31st May 2015 - 5 years ago

    Stay strong, I would like to tell your dad how good his kid is. Maybe try some Trance: it can open feelings.
    Good luck!

    Reply by mudhoen

    Thank you for your kind words. My dad does not like Dance music, thatswhy I have chosen this genre..

  11. silverman
    silverman on Sat 30th May 2015 - 5 years ago

    I'm thinking the first thing this needs is a little base tone in there.
    It's obviously not lacking love.
    Sorry to hear about your old man but really happy to hear he has someone like you around him.
    Having a kid like you around him is seriously important.
    You might be a fifty year old kid for all I know but it doesn't matter ... you're still his kid .... he's still your dad.
    I have kids like you and grand kids too and feel so blessed.
    From what you wrote you know you'll be saying goodbye to each other in time ... shorter time than you both would have liked but time is time .... make the most of it.
    I hope these wonderful people offering to rally around and contribute to your piece at the very least put a smile on your faces.
    I'm going to download it and have a play with it.
    Don't be expecting miracles.
    I might even go for humour.
    You might never hear anything simply because I wasn't happy with the result but I'll have a go.
    Meanwhile ... tell your old man what you're doing ... what your putting out here and why even if you don't let him hear anything just yet.
    He'll be over the moon honestly.
    Share stuff with him.
    You obviously love him.
    So share ... laugh ... cry ... get fucking angry.
    Be with each other.
    You won't regret it and he'll cherish you all the more.


    Reply by mudhoen

    Thank you very much for your kind and meaningful words. I moved to germany 5 years ago (from Holland). We are a pretty close family. My dad never had serious ilnesses and then something like this happens... Very frustrating. I really want to tell my father that im doing this for him. But the surprise would be even greater when it is fully done. I had always a good life with my parents and I want tgem to give something good back. Maybe next time I will tell him...

  12. Orlando51
    Orlando51 on Sat 30th May 2015 - 5 years ago

    Nice song....I would like to add something to it if you're interested. In that case send me a PM! Otherwise...stay strong and don't loose hope!

    All the best_____Orlando

  13. danke
    danke on Sat 30th May 2015 - 5 years ago

    Sorry bout your strong in this period...

    Anyway, it's a hopeful tracky and I thought about doing stg with the song...I downloaded, but I have to take 1 week out of Looperman and than I will jump on it...


    Reply by mudhoen

    Thank you Danke. Really appreciate you stepping in to help. My humble gratitude!

  14. surya94
    surya94 on Sat 30th May 2015 - 5 years ago

    yes i do have nexus

  15. surya94
    surya94 on Sat 30th May 2015 - 5 years ago

    sorry to hear about the sad news....

    im happy that u r doing so much for him.
    Maybe if u can send me the flp i would like to try somethings in it...

    Reply by mudhoen

    Thank you for your kind words. I would be honored if you could work with my file. Do you have Nexus? Otherwise i will send you the flp without it. What is your Email?

  16. Burtsbluesboxes
    Burtsbluesboxes on Sat 30th May 2015 - 5 years ago

    I've recorded the acoustic guitar like 20 - 30 time now and for some strange reason its not lining up like there's a delay in the recording even though I play in time with the music :/ Well best of luck, sorry I can't get a proper recording for you....

    Reply by mudhoen

    I understand and thank you very much for giving it a try. Too bad that you couldnt get it as you wanted it to be. Nevertheless my sincere gratitude!

  17. Burtsbluesboxes
    Burtsbluesboxes on Sat 30th May 2015 - 5 years ago

    Very sad news, stay strong :( I dl'd this and have an idea, the final product is up to you... I'm going to record some acoustic guitar playing basically what you have (Dm to Am) I also dl'd an acapella that may work. I'll let you know shortly. I like the arrangement and the drums but think real acoustic may add something you can't capture with a vst. I'll share the files with you privately when I got something.

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