A classy and elegant outro track for an album. I love the minimalism of the arrangement and yet how the piece really pulls you in. The F# Maj is an inspired chord choice that adds a lovely resolution to the end of every second bar. You should be quite proud of this one.
- The clappy finger snaps don't convince me. I would go for a real, organic sound.
- There seems to be a de-essing problem. I hear a lot hissing from 0:29 onwards. It is very distracting. I recommend to EQ-sweep the corresponing spots to detect the problematic frequencies of the singer. Then reduce the "s" and "t" sounds by hand (-5dB to -10 dB, or so) and, additionally, de-ess further using the EQ- frequencies (super narrow cuts, -5dB to -10dB again). It is not an exact science, so play around until the pain in your ears is gone.
- I think the reverb is a little too roomy/boxy. I would try and make it more ethereal. It could be an idea to (sidechain-)duck it behind the vocals, so it comes up once the vocal rang out.
- Check your LUFS. I would not go beyond -9 dB.
- If you are aiming at TV (I think this is very licensable and you would be in business soon), create a clean version (no n-word, f-word,...), too. Make sure everyone has their ducks in a row before submitting to a library or supervisor - i.e. everyone has their PRO membership sorted and all split sheets etc. have been signed. Also, make sure no one uploaded it to Spotify, CDBaby, Distrokid and such and clicked a monetization, administration, or publishing button - an absolute no-no if you want to earn money in film/TV, because your track needs to be unencumbered.
Overall, a very cool track and not much more has to be done in my opinion. If you can produce like this, you should be able to earn good money in TV licensing. Good luck with it!
Commented on Jack up the Speaker by Dj4Real
Love this one, giving me some Eric Prydz type vibes! :)
Commented on Pink Clouds by Dj4Real
nice!!11
Commented on Uncharted by Dj4Real
kick so soft no power
Commented on Pink Clouds by Dj4Real
good job looks like liquid
Commented on Jack up the Speaker by Dj4Real
LOVE IT
Commented on Pink Clouds by Dj4Real
very nice
Commented on Think outside the box by Dj4Real
Good one!
Commented on Pink Clouds by Dj4Real
This is hella dope I don't remember seeing drum n bass loops from u. If could please thank you
Commented on Uncharted by Dj4Real
Thanks!
Commented on Uncharted by Dj4Real
Bruh, i want to download it to listen it on my car
Commented on Whatever it takes by Dj4Real
Nice!!
Commented on Bounce on the Floor by Dj4Real
Nice beat there. Good work.
Commented on Follow the Rabbit by Dj4Real
I'll follow this rabbit, just not down any rabbit holes lol. Hardly ever click on rnb but glad I did, this is super chill. Enviably nice clear mix.
Commented on Mind Body and Soul by Dj4Real
A classy and elegant outro track for an album. I love the minimalism of the arrangement and yet how the piece really pulls you in. The F# Maj is an inspired chord choice that adds a lovely resolution to the end of every second bar. You should be quite proud of this one.
Commented on Mind Body and Soul by Dj4Real
Very nice contemporary R&B, good singer!
Production:
- I think the kick is too loud, try -5dB.
- The clappy finger snaps don't convince me. I would go for a real, organic sound.
- There seems to be a de-essing problem. I hear a lot hissing from 0:29 onwards. It is very distracting. I recommend to EQ-sweep the corresponing spots to detect the problematic frequencies of the singer. Then reduce the "s" and "t" sounds by hand (-5dB to -10 dB, or so) and, additionally, de-ess further using the EQ- frequencies (super narrow cuts, -5dB to -10dB again). It is not an exact science, so play around until the pain in your ears is gone.
- I think the reverb is a little too roomy/boxy. I would try and make it more ethereal. It could be an idea to (sidechain-)duck it behind the vocals, so it comes up once the vocal rang out.
- Check your LUFS. I would not go beyond -9 dB.
- If you are aiming at TV (I think this is very licensable and you would be in business soon), create a clean version (no n-word, f-word,...), too. Make sure everyone has their ducks in a row before submitting to a library or supervisor - i.e. everyone has their PRO membership sorted and all split sheets etc. have been signed. Also, make sure no one uploaded it to Spotify, CDBaby, Distrokid and such and clicked a monetization, administration, or publishing button - an absolute no-no if you want to earn money in film/TV, because your track needs to be unencumbered.
Overall, a very cool track and not much more has to be done in my opinion. If you can produce like this, you should be able to earn good money in TV licensing. Good luck with it!
Tom/CTWF
Commented on Mind Body and Soul by Dj4Real
bro this some heat! good job on the track!
Commented on Mind Body and Soul by Dj4Real
Great job on all fronts. Well constructed and nice vocals! Enjoyed! Fila
Commented on Mind Body and Soul by Dj4Real
wait wtf didnt see that coming this is fire
Commented on Mind Body and Soul by Dj4Real
Loved the vibe
amazing vocals and the beat is so calming and soothing
nice job
:D
Commented on Love is the key I am the lock by Dj4Real
wow nice tune
Commented on Whatever it takes by Dj4Real
very nice tune
Commented on Whatever it takes by Dj4Real
I really like this
Commented on Whatever it takes by Dj4Real
lovung thus
Commented on Name of the game by Dj4Real
So...as it may be dated, I still dig it. I stumble with mastering techniques as well, but that keeps me interested. Thanks
Commented on Bomswalla Ft Kituh Spiritchild by Dj4Real
good job dj4real, nice flow and beat