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Description : So, NapoleonicEmperor posted in the forums that he was interested in collaborating with producers who could produce 80's style tracks. I have never attempted that, so decided it was a worthy challenge. I have no idea if this draft track actually does sound like 80's. Definitely does not sound like SAW. I need work up to that level, but I'm trying. This track uses mostly VST emulations of 80's instruments including Linndrum, Juno 60, Vox Continental, Prophet 5, and Jupiter 8. This version of the track is incomplete, but I thought I'd see if I could get some feedback at this stage. I have written only one verse, which I've had to just repeat in this version. The track should really have three verses. Much more work required on fine-tuning the mix. Too much reverb on the vocals? I can't believe that I've actually posted another track with my vocals. NapoleonicEmperor probably could do a better job on them, but I must admit I did have fun trying out different vocal styles. Anyway, please give me some suggestions/advice.

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  1. Spd2
    Spd2 on Sat 18th Feb 2017 - 1 day ago
    I really like the reverb on the vocals imo. It doesn't lose the vocals in the mix and it has a good texture to it. Did you use a filter for the vocals? I do hear a reminisce of great 80's music. I was thinking Devo the second the bassline kicked in. Speaking of which, I like the delay used on the bassline, it sounds thick and wide. I prefer using a stereo delay with 1/8 ms on each side of a track, especially when it is an important component in the center mix. Your voice sounds fresh and original, unlike nasally singers I hear nowadays. I would like to hear more of it in your future songs. I really enjoyed the arrangement, well crafted. Overall, fabulous production. Thank you very much for sharing :)

    Pete
  2. crucethus
    crucethus on Sat 18th Feb 2017 - 2 days ago
    Hey Eric. Yes I would need the stems with no effects as I would add in my own. But I could also use the ones with effects. if you wish to send me all the stems I would love to remix the whole track, that would be fun indeed. In Acid I had to either render the isolated track, or just right click on the track properties to save the stem. Not sure about logic.
    Steve
  3. crucethus
    crucethus on Sat 18th Feb 2017 - 2 days ago
    Thanks for the props Eric, but it´s only a minor in music, my true major is in Marketing. ;-). Great tune Eric, you took the Rik Ocaesek comment to heart as I see. SAW isd easy in hindsight, but I give great credit to them for innovating a unique sound that was not heard at the time of there Zeitgeist. This song you did, is so awesome. eighties sound, but I love your vocals. I would love to enhance the stem, so let me know if you want that, and I think it needs to be a little louder in the mix. but seriously great job.
    Steve
    EricMilligan
    Reply by EricMilligan Thanks, Steve. I really wasn't sure if this did sound 80's at all. I'm actually a bit surprised at the vocals. Three very different vocal styles in the same song. Not quite sure what to make of that.

    Anyway, yes I'd be very interested in having you enhance the stem. I'd like to see what you can do with it.

    Should I output it entirely without any effects? And, would you want a stem of the instrument tracks all together (i.e., without the vocal) so you can work on the vocals in context?

    There are actually about 5 separate vocal tracks I think, including the "echo" vocals at the end of the verses. I should be able to bounce them all down into one vocal stem, but you might want me to keep them separated if you think that you might be applying different effects to different parts of the vocal.

    Let me know how you want the stems. In the meantime, I'll research how to produce stems in Logic Pro. (Have never done it before.)
  4. Eighteen
    Eighteen on Fri 17th Feb 2017 - 2 days ago
    Sega sounding bassline there xD awesome, spacefunk right here :D

    I like it!

    ~Eighteen
    EricMilligan
    Reply by EricMilligan Thank-you Eighteen. From the response so far, it looks like I'm heading in the right direction on this track. I really must try to write the lyrics for the other two verses. That's going to be the key to getting this one finished. :)

    Eric
  5. sqrtofneg1
    sqrtofneg1 on Fri 17th Feb 2017 - 2 days ago
    The bass reminded me of the bass from the Dr. Mario Fever theme.

    I think you've captured the 80s theme well.

    The vocals were well mixed with a lot of reverb, but it fit very well in my opinion.

    The fade out was a little long in my opinion.

    Good piece, well done!
    EricMilligan
    Reply by EricMilligan Thanks for the encouragement, square root of minus one! :) (I really need to look that up!) I had to go on Youtube to checkout the bass from Dr. Mario Fever theme. Learning every day here on Looperman! On reflection, I think I could drop 8 bars of the fadeout. I usually only have a total of 8 bars, but for some reason this time I used 12. Will experiment. Easily done. I can just change the automation on the volume and drop it down more quickly.

    Eric
  6. Spivkurl
    Spivkurl on Fri 17th Feb 2017 - 2 days ago
    I have no idea what "SAW" is referring to in your description or the comments, care to elaborate? I've listened to eighties music pretty obsessively, both pop and underground, but still can not find a reference. It also appears to be one of things things which is "un-googleable," since I keep getting results about band saws. This is a cool work though, so far, and it reminds me a bit of Gary Numan/Tubeway Army stuff. Possibly it is a bit much on the vocal reverb, but that is also a personal preference. I like the synth emulations you've chosen as well. Looking forward to hearing the finished work! Keep at it!
    EricMilligan
    Reply by EricMilligan Hi, Spivkurl. I didn't know what SAW was either until a few days ago when Crucethus mentioned it in the forum. I figured it out. It is short for: Stock Aitken Waterman the songwriting/producing team behind Rick Ashley and probably a lot of others.

    https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stock_Aitken_Waterman

    Definitely not band saws! :)

    I do think I should tone down the reverb a bit. Better still, get a decent vocalist do I don't have to disguise things with massive amounts of effects. The vocal track has EQ, compression, ADT vocal doubling, and reverb on it. I recorded probably a minimum of 6 takes for each section of the song and then learned how to comp the vocals in Logic Pro. Didn't have to use autotune this time, which is good because I'm not very proficient with it.

    I'm not familiar at all with Tubeway Army. I will check that out immediately.
  7. NapoleonicEmperor
    NapoleonicEmperor on Fri 17th Feb 2017 - 3 days ago
    I like where you are going with this! It's a nice bouncy dance track... SAW is hard but I think you do it! I'm not a producer so I couldn't even attempt it.
    EricMilligan
    Reply by EricMilligan Thanks for the encouragement, NE. I have a bad habit of losing interest/patience with tracks before they are properly finished and just moving on to something new. I'll try to stick a bit longer with this one and get it completed. Then, I would like to try my hand at a SAW-type track.

    Crucethus (also from Ottawa, so we can meet in person periodically) says they aren't all that difficult to make, but he's actually got a degree in music and is really knowledgeable about this kind of stuff. What's easy for him is going to be much more of a challenge for me, I think. But, I actually like SAW stuff and attempting to replicate tracks is a really good way to learn how stuff works.

    At least on this track I managed to come up with a structure that included a verse, bridge, chorus, and outro. Also got a lot more experience comping vocal takes in Logic Pro. That's progress for me!

    Thanks for inspiring/challenging me to attempt this. Has been fun so far.

    Eric

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Verse:
We are standing on shifting sands
Everything’s happening according to plan
Lockin’ and loadin’, but it’s OK.
We’re takin em down and clearin the way
Clearin the way, clearin the way.

Everything’s changin’, nothin’s the same
Beggars are choosers,  choosers are lame.
Slippin and sliding with Sammy Kaye
We’re takin the high road and stealin away
Stealin away, stealin away.

Bridge:
It’s the time to shock the system
It’s the time to rock the town
Don’t rely on  words of wisdom
Take a ride on the Merry Go Round

Chorus:

We’re in a gun fight
We’re goin’ all night
It’s almost daylight
Surrender  today.
It’s better that way.

It’s such a strange sight
It doesn’t feel right
It’s lookin’ too bright
I really can’t stay
Got nothing to say

Outro:
Talk to me
Talk to me
Talk to me today

 


 

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