Description : Revolutionary type rap with lyrics,can I get some feedback I appreciate it

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  1. Dennel
    Dennel on Wed 7th Sep 2016 - 7 years ago

    Hey EK, instant fav this is what I'm talkin' 'bout! I luv tracks like this that turn the focus on the real subject matter and ain't afraid to say it like it is! I have an unfinished track based on the continuous and daily assassinations of our young brothers, sisters and babies "entitled Hands Up Don't Shoot!", if I can somehow get the track finished up we may have to do a colab. Great job on this I am impressed.

    Peace

    D

  2. apuigr
    apuigr on Sat 12th Dec 2015 - 8 years ago

    Very Nice.

  3. TayaliJeffrey
    TayaliJeffrey on Sat 14th Nov 2015 - 8 years ago

    nICE CONCEPT LOVED IT MAN

    Ernestking78
    Reply by Ernestking78

    Thanks

  4. mystlife
    mystlife on Sat 14th Nov 2015 - 8 years ago

    however it was a great song ( honestly )

    Ernestking78
    Reply by Ernestking78

    Thanks

  5. highdhausen
    highdhausen on Fri 13th Nov 2015 - 8 years ago

    nice work man thanks

    Ernestking78
    Reply by Ernestking78

    You welcome thank you I'm glad you like it

  6. BCVProductions
    BCVProductions on Fri 13th Nov 2015 - 8 years ago

    Yeah, I like these lyrics a lot. I would like to hear a vocal backing track on the hook to brace it a little. A slightly less hot sound on the main vocals too bc it distorts in some places.
    This is a really good song and a tight rap.

    Ernestking78
    Reply by Ernestking78

    Thanks what's a vocal backing track? A dub? I THINK I KNOW what you talking about with the distortion I peeped that 2 so I'm a watch out for that in doing my next song

  7. farzy
    farzy on Fri 13th Nov 2015 - 8 years ago

    this is perfect

    Ernestking78
    Reply by Ernestking78

    Thanks I appreciate that,it feel good when you make music for yourself and the world,for others to like it besides yourself as well

  8. larrybarrow31
    larrybarrow31 on Fri 13th Nov 2015 - 8 years ago

    Tha track is dope fam, really saying something for the world to hear, i love music wit a meassage and you nailed it my friend, the beat is tight and the vocals on point. keep'em coming my friend

    Ernestking78
    Reply by Ernestking78

    Thanks I appreciate that,your comment inspire me even more to keep going and put the best I can out

  9. HunterFoxzAC
    HunterFoxzAC on Fri 13th Nov 2015 - 8 years ago

    Really nice...Don't listen to Rap all the time..I really like what you did with this Track....

    Ernestking78
    Reply by Ernestking78

    Thanks I appreciate that

  10. pseudonym43
    pseudonym43 on Fri 13th Nov 2015 - 8 years ago

    shid iz hard homie keep it up G~!

    Ernestking78
    Reply by Ernestking78

    Thanks I appreciate that,I'm writing now I wanna raise the bar so we can get good music from more artists again

  11. SecretSam123
    SecretSam123 on Thu 12th Nov 2015 - 8 years ago

    i like it bro. you got good vibes, sticking in with the rhythm of the beat. it sounds simple but so many people struggle to do it haha!

    Ernestking78
    Reply by Ernestking78

    Thanks I appreciate that!!!

  12. JasonCroft
    JasonCroft on Thu 12th Nov 2015 - 8 years ago

    nice job
    im not suppose to fuss tracks
    but i just tell my opinion:

    1.i think it would be better if you add some effects like chorus or vocodex to your chorus parts

    2.your vocal line is so wide i think it would be better if you turn down the volume a bit and turn down the widing effect's (every plugin you use) volume a bit

    3.i just heard a noise like (Wiss Wiss) when you're rapping so it can be better if you use a compressor for killing some additional freqs or you can soundgoodize your vocal

    however it was a great song ( honestly )
    and i just told my opinion
    hats off...

    Ernestking78
    Reply by Ernestking78

    Thanks it ain't nothing like some feedback so you can get a sense of how other people hear it

  13. Olhm
    Olhm on Thu 12th Nov 2015 - 8 years ago

    It's a track & all that, but it can use a little more personality. Like if somebody says something about eating popcorn, toss a sample of some kernels popping in the background, &/or toss a chorus effect on certain vocals to give to lyrics more pop/variation/ definition. Only other thing I can think of is maybe back off the main compression a bit so the kick & snare don't get washed out in the mix. Your track sounds good dude

    Ernestking78
    Reply by Ernestking78

    Thanks I never even asked the man at the studio can he put sound effects behind certain words but I do think it's a nice idea,like if you say bee you hear a buzz in the background yeah I'm a try implementing that

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