Tags : | Rap | 6.95 MB | Has Lyrics | Featured

Description : A song about leaving for deployment.

Music by Sceptikdeejay.
Lyrics written and performed by ArtfulOne aka Raptor Red.

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  1. larrybarrow31
    larrybarrow31 on Mon 15th Sep 2014 - 9 years ago

    nice flow my friend, need just a little work in different area, but never the less nice. keep up the good work.

  2. StrikingDaggers
    StrikingDaggers on Mon 1st Sep 2014 - 9 years ago

    Pretty cool track ArtfulOne! Sceptikdeejay came through with a dope beat and you delivered on the flows. I'm not a fan on the chorus and I think the vocals should be turned down a little bit. But other than that the overall mix sounds good. It was an enjoyable listen. Nice work.

  3. benjizo
    benjizo on Fri 22nd Aug 2014 - 9 years ago

    Kinda cool joint.The hook need work though.

  4. promenade2239
    promenade2239 on Fri 22nd Aug 2014 - 9 years ago

    Hi ArtfulOne,
    I agree with joecramer comment: you definitely need a female vocal singing refrain by this one:) A kind of a very straitforward song (for me:)) but you did it very well with keeping time and rapping. This one makes me think of productions from Pitbull or some older music from 90's. But it is still really well done by singing along the whole track. Good job.
    A.

  5. joecramer
    joecramer on Fri 22nd Aug 2014 - 9 years ago

    Cool rap

    I like it a lot. You did a good work with the vocals.
    but :)
    Music is realy to low. And i would let a female sing the refrain with changed words - thas why i leave, now im gone

    Real good work
    stay tuned
    joe

  6. StaticProjekt
    StaticProjekt on Fri 22nd Aug 2014 - 9 years ago

    Chill beat, the delivery of your vocals reminds me of bloodhound gang, like Johnny said i'd recommend turning down the volume of the vocals just a bit so they fit more with the instrumental as they overpower it, but only by a little, still really good

  7. johnnyproducing
    johnnyproducing on Fri 22nd Aug 2014 - 9 years ago

    Pretty nice, bit of chillout though I would look into the mixing. The vocals could be turned a notch down to allow the listener to experience the beat in combination with the vocals more instead of just hearing the vocals so hard

    Also I would check into the limiter settings, everything seems to be quiet high up into the master, might be a good idea to turn things down so that the limiter doesn't have to cut a great deal on the volume

    Still a good song though ;)

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